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Friday, March 15, 2013

"Are Muckrakers to Blame or to Thank?" by Raul


The term “muckraker” has been used to describe reform-minded journalists since after 1900. This term became popular in 1906 when the President of the United States, Theodore Roosevelt, used it to insult journalists who, in his opinion, had gone too far to expose real or made-up misconduct of prominent individuals or businesses.

Today, people still argue about whether or not being called a “muckraker” should be considered an insult or an honor. Those who don’t agree with the way muckrakers gather their information describe these journalists as intrusive and rude, and that they do anything to get good information, even if that means lying (Wood).  

Although some people believe that muckrakers go too far in exposing misconduct, I, along with many others, believe that muckrakers have had a positive effect on our society. Muckrakers have helped society by causing many new reforms and by encouraging people to act modestly and honestly.

Throughout history, muckrakers have been bringing up issues and finding information that has caused to reforms to be put in place to help society for the better. One example of a muckraker who has helped out society greatly is Upton Sinclair. In the 1900’s, Sinclair wrote a book called The Jungle, in which he aimed to “expose the shocking conditions that immigrant workers endured,” as stated by San Leandro High School. Sinclair exposed the terrible working conditions for immigrants, describing to everyone how dangerous and unsanitary the meat factories that they worked in could be. Even though Sinclair had exposed the meatpacking industry of its danger towards the customers as well as the workers (by explaining how badly the food would be treated), Sinclair had actually done society a favor. Sinclair’s exposition of the industry led to federal investigations and in 1906, the Meat Inspection Act was passed as a result. Without Sinclair’s book, people would have continued to eat the unsanitary meat, which would have caused even more illnesses from meat. Sinclair is described as a muckraker for exposing the meatpacking industry, but no one can argue that the result of his muckraking only helped society in the long run.

Another muckraker who has had a positive effect on society is Helen Hunt Jackson. After hearing from a Native American about how they were being mistreated by the government, Jackson decided to do something about it. In 1881, Jackson described the effects of government actions on Native American tribes in her book, A Century of Dishonor, which she sent copies of to Congress. In her book, Jackson explains the tribal history of several different tribes. Due to Jackson’s exposition of the government’s mistreatment towards the Native Americans, Congress acted to remedy the situation in Ponca, one of the Native American tribes being mistreated. The book did not make as big of an impact as Jackson had hoped for, she did cause a step in the right direction for better treatment of Native Americans. By displaying how the tribes were being treated, Jackson was able to help society.

A current example of muckrakers affecting society in a good way is Julian Assange creating WikiLeaks. WikiLeaks is a non-profit organization created to provide secret news, information, and leaks to the public. On the WikiLeaks website, it is explained that “better scrutiny leads to reduced corruption and stronger democracies in all society’s institutions, including government, corporations and other organizations.” I agree with this theory that muckraking can lead to a less corrupt government and society. Muckraking can eliminate dishonest officials from the government and also, if people know that their information is likely to be leaked, it would encourage more people to act in a moral way in the first place.

By exposing individuals and businesses, muckrakers play an important part in doing their best to eradicate corruption from society as a whole. Muckrakers should be honored to have that title because it shows that they have played a part in attempting to improve society.


Friday, November 30, 2012

"Unveiling the Words" by Raul


"The pages are still blank, but there is a miraculous feeling of the words being there, written in invisible ink and clamoring to become visible.” -Vladimir Nabakov
                                                                                                                                                           
            Although I have always loved to write, it takes a long time and a lot of frustration for me to write what I mean to say. I have always found it difficult to get what’s in my head onto paper. I always wish that I could just write down my thoughts without thinking, but I am unable to do that because I am always worried about making my sentences perfect. I usually sit with my laptop or papers, ready to write my essay, but for some reason I can never get my words out. To get to the point of where my words come out into my writing freely, I go through a whole process of brainstorming and outlining. I then continue using my usual process of how I write an essay.  
            I begin my essay by planning out what I want to say in it. In order for me to gather all my ideas and organize them in a way that makes my essay flow, I create a list of what I want to say in each paragraph. I only write a short sentence for each bullet point, and then I move them around in an order that makes sense. Some people write detailed outlines with all of their commentary in it, but I like to keep it short and then expand on what I have. This way, I know what I want to say in each paragraph and then the words come out of my mind easily. If I tried any other way then I would be sitting in front of the computer deciding how to word each sentence, which would take me a very long time.
            After I have a list of what I want to include in my paper, I begin with my introduction. Some people write their introduction after they have completed their body paragraphs, but I find it easier to just have the introduction written so that I can write my essay as I go. For me, the introduction of an essay is the most difficult paragraph to write and it takes the longest time. Even though I always have my paragraphs planned out before I start writing my introduction, I never know what I want to say in it. I sit there for a long time in front of my computer, hoping that I will get an idea of what to say to start off my essay. I become very aggravated when I can’t think of what to say.
            When writing an essay, I tend to get distracted quite a bit. This is the biggest challenge for me during my writing process. Distractions add to the reasons why it takes me so long to begin writing words out. If my mind strays for just a moment, I find myself unintentionally picking up my cell phone. Once I get distracted, I am likely to stay on twitter or continue texting for hours. I always hear people say that music really helps them stay in focus, but for me it does the opposite. Even if the music is on low volume and is really relaxing and calm, I lose focus. Any little sound can distract me. For example, if my brother is jumping around in the room next to mine, I try to ignore it and continue writing, but I usually end up going over to him and yelling at him to stop. I need to be in complete concentration if I am to ever get any good sentences onto paper.
            Although I get distracted a lot while writing, once I do start to write and I know what I want to say, the words flow out of my mind and I start typing away. To me, the best feeling is not when I have completed an essay, but when I have a steady pace of writing down my ideas. Once I really get into my writing, I just keep writing whatever comes into my mind. Then, when my essay is finally done, I go back and edit it. I sometimes have to change whole paragraphs or even take out sentences here and there, but compared to writing the essay, the revising doesn’t take me too long.
            Once I have finished writing and revising my work, I think back to when I had just started to write that essay. It really amazes me that, although I didn’t know how to say what I wanted at first, I eventually got everything out of my mind and into my essay. It really is like the words are all there, just waiting for me to figure out how to make them visible.

"Ivy League School" by Monica Cody

When I was a young child, I knew that I wanted to go to Harvard. To study what, I don’t know. I barely knew what Harvard was, other than th...